All Comments on 'In the Darkness'

A very nice story with a smoothly flowing plotline.

I do appreciate a well defined and descriptive story. Imagery is everything and your words at the time of everyone's orgasm were quite lovely without the usual and tedious "Ooh baby oohs"

Nice... I may be sending you some of fantasies afterall. And some border on extreme and bizarre

Thanks

Very well done story and hot as hell.

Great story ! Hopefull to hear about " tomorrow " .