All Comments on 'In The Loft'

You are quickly becoming a favorite author. I enjoy a well written story and you deliver. The two comments that ran through my mind were why she did not call the police and was there no other way out. A simple line like, "I looked around for a phone, but being that it was a storage area there was none" would have addressed the first. Then a line that confirmed she was trapped up in the loft with no other way to leave, like "As he made his way up the only entrance I felt trapped, like a rat" would have addressed the second.

As to the people who complain about rapes, why are they at this web site? They need to go get a life.

Thank you.

I liked it but, it was too fast. I was just starting to get into what was happening to one girl and you moved on to another. I guess I wanted more detail for each rape. You're still my favorite author.

Nicely written and hot.