All Comments on 'In The Still Of The Night'

Really enjoyed that, will there be a continuation???

Alicexxx

Needs editing, badly, but the story has great possibilities. I hope you will continue, and this time, find an editor. Good job.

loved it, the ending was brilliant cant wait for more

Not exactly smooth in terms of story flow... but I loved it nonetheless. You could write lots, stemming from this story alone. Hope you write more about them! ^^

This is a nice story that could be turned into a series. There are a lot of unanswered questions though. Maybe I will get the answers when you finish the story.

This was a really interesting story. I could see this turned into a series. I love the detail of your character and the events that you described. The sex scene was hott as well. It's almost a take on Underworld but better. You have a real talent. Can't wait to see what else you come up with. You may just have a fan on your hands.

Will there be more? This is a beginning for a great story.

Great story, I sure hope there is more to come.

would like more of this story.

Every paragraph is a sentence-- a really, really, really, really long sentence. Periods are an important part of any good story.

I hope you continue with this story. I love the fact that its not like any other Were story. Keep up the good work and please continue with this story!!

It needs a true imagination to write non-human stories - you have done a really, really fine job. Thanks, it was sensual and erotic, a twist (when I thought Jack was to be the 'hero') and an ending which lends itself to further Chapters...

Wow I really love this story and where it's going.... I hope that you continue...