by SizzilingWords
Wow, this is very, very good. Better than expected for a "first try". Good use of descriptions, decent story, well written, coherent. And something to think about the next time I need something to think about. Great job!
Don't stop writing now. Your tastes and kinks feed my spirit and make me so happy and hot. Thanks for taking the time to write and share. I especially liked how she was naked and he was not, nice surpirse ending. More. please.
Wondering if you've done anything further. This story feels like I am actually there.