by SizzilingWords
Wondering if you've done anything further. This story feels like I am actually there.
Don't stop writing now. Your tastes and kinks feed my spirit and make me so happy and hot. Thanks for taking the time to write and share. I especially liked how she was naked and he was not, nice surpirse ending. More. please.
Wow, this is very, very good. Better than expected for a "first try". Good use of descriptions, decent story, well written, coherent. And something to think about the next time I need something to think about. Great job!