Inheritance Ch. 01

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Jane and Elizabeth tussled over who would capture the creamy cum and both of them quickly gathered a mouth full which they then swapped it between them in a lingering kiss.

I was done, I had come more times in one evening that I had in months, and despite pouting lips from both women I settled down to sleep, commanding them to do the same.

Once again I was being generous and allowed both subs to sleep in the bed with me. The last thing I felt as I fell asleep was a kiss on my cheek from my mum. I don't care how old you are, that always feels good.

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scipioparkinsscipioparkins2 months agoAuthor

John Norman's Gor series of books.

Jack506Jack5063 months ago

I recognize the “novelist” reference, but am curious about the “sci-fi/fantasy” series that included bondage. Anybody know the series referenced?

Interesting story. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I believe “generally positive” would be an apt description for the story. I appreciate that there’s a learning process in the story because that fetish doesn’t make much sense to me either without an explanation.

Good use of humor throughout to lighten a potentially heavy subject. My only criticism would be that I imagine it would be an adjustment for the ladies, even if they’re used to both incest and submission. Perhaps some initial hesitancy or embarrassment would have made it a bit more realistic as MC could have rejected his role.

DocWordsDocWordsover 1 year ago

Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your work. I’m looking forward to your next chapter.

scipioparkinsscipioparkinsover 1 year agoAuthor

To the Anonymous person who sent me feedback regarding Mike's use of the term 'marketing' and it's noun being singular.

Thank you, much appreciated. Sorry if it touched a nerve.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

As expected, this story is developing logically. Character development (mother and frandmoother) continue realistically ( see Chapter 0 and oo). The effort of the son to learn the difference between submissive and slave is appreciated. Most inexperienced Doms fail miserably in this area. Finally, the epiphany of the son that his mother and grandmother are females with sexual needs and wants was well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

You can't write

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Well, yes.. "Shaved" dolt.. - Childish of an additive.

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
the story has my curiosity

and I can see that I have a lot to learn in order to fully appreciate this genre.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago

Not a big fan of the master/sub thing or any type of pain, but I am an enthusiastic supporter of the mom/son or grandmom/son fucking scene. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

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