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by PTremer
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brfinestover 16 years agoWhere Do We Go From Here?
An interesting start. Pure fantasy or a recount of an incident? Keep writting and let's see what can happen?
Orion623over 16 years agoInteresting
Must have been a very crowded airport for them to be separated as they were. A bit short but worth reading. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousover 16 years agothis has tremendous potential!
please bring on the next chapters quickly. don't lose your momentum now!
Anonymousover 16 years agoKeep it coming!
Keep it coming! My favorite of your two postings. Great start.
Anonymousover 7 years agoIn this intro, the author has crafted the stage for the two characters to interact and learn more about each other... the husband will also learn a lot about himself
I gave this intro chapter a 5- (4.6/5.0 = 92% = A).
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