All Comments on 'Innocence Ch. 03'

by PTremer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Action, please.

You write very well. But your 'wife' doesn't do anything. She doesn't fuck you, and alas, she doesn't fuck her raunchy admirers.

Please add some more chapters, and put them in the delicious 'Loving Wife' category.

Looking foreward to really great fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i like it this way

i kind of like it this way with her just teasing, but maybe as well as that teasing maybe its more strong, and also maybe show some sex with the husband or something, i dont think she should go to far with the other random guys though because she likes showing off not actually fucking other guys. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow

Good to know possible for an enjoyable story without sex

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
LOVE IT: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (4.8/5 = 96%)

:)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

5- (4.6 = 92%, ♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎-)!

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