All Comments on 'Inside the Faerie Ring'

Too many run-on sentences. A comma is not a period. Also, don't use "your" when you want to use "you're".

This is a very interesting story. There where some grammar errors but the flow was great and the pacing was where it should be. Thank u for sharing. Mechmanas

I enjoyed your story and didn't even notice the grammatical errors myself. I need to re-read my stories to ensure that I am not guilty of the same things. I have learned something else from reading your story: I thought that the end was a tad abrupt. I know that I do this for effect myself, but it is the first time that I have read it in someone else's work; and so can see the effect on my readers.

I discovered your work a few minutes ago and I am reading a few of your stories. Thanks for keeping me company tonight.

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I like your writing style and I thought that your story was adorable and to the point. I didn't notice any of the grammatical errors :p