All Comments on 'Interlude with a Poet'

Seems like the first part of the story was written from a white point of view, whereas once the dialog began it became about a "brother", nothing big, but perhaps more consistency would help the flow a bit, otherwise great work

I really appreciate thus story as it js really capitavating. This was not a story of flesh beating but one that is full of emotions and making connections. It was so intense and i felt every words to my core. Looking forward for more.