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All Comments on 'Interstate'

by Kaishaku

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papagrizpapagrizalmost 13 years ago
YOUR LEAD IN SUCKS

and the first paragraph of your story turns me off completely. Don't give up your day time job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Your lead in does not suck

I liked it. Gave you a 4 star. I won't blow sunshine up your skirt and say it was the best thing I've ever read, but it was definitely worth reading. Keep it up! :)

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