by sexciprincess
I love the story line. You have to continue this. Please. You are one sexy writer.
Grass
nicely done, just waiting for more installments - longer too since i enjoy them so much. keep the story going, jack punishing and f-ing his girl as she explores the relationship too. the online 'participation' was a nice touch.
-nibora
You know who has written this. PM me to get off totally. Dirty bitch.