Into the Quetico

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"It most certainly would be but the logistics of that could be a problem. It would however make a great place for a honeymoon."

She looked up at me and smiled and then reached around and smacked my ass again. "Now what was that for?"

"Maybe I am staking claim to something and I just wanted you to know it."

I reached around and patted her ass a couple of times and said, "That works both ways sweetheart."

We walked to the canoe and pushed it out a ways so she could get in and then I shoved off and sat into my seat in the back. We made very good time getting through the first portage since we did not have much to carry and when you are not in a hurry to leave it just seems to go much smoother. We got back in just below the falls and started on the final leg of the journey toward our trucks.

I am guessing that in a little over two hours later we were back to the final point where we carried our gear to the trucks. It was obvious by the way we were acting that we did not want to be going back. I looked at her and said, "Cheer up."

"Why is that, I don't want to leave."

"I don't want to leave either but you need to look at this in a positive way sweetheart."

"How is leaving here a positive?"

"Before we came here we did not know each other. We met and we only live 30 miles apart. I can see you any time I want too."

Her eyes brightened up and a smile finally crossed her face and she said, "You are not just saying that to get rid of me are you?"

"I will be at your house tonight if that is what it takes for you to believe me otherwise I will be in your office on Tuesday to see you."

"You mean that don't you."

"With all my heart."

She smiled at me as we picked up our packs and shouldered them. With the tent stuffed in the front of the canoe we lifted it up and headed towards the trucks. It sure did seem like it was a short journey taking everything out. You are in such a hurry to get in here it seems to take forever but leaving is another matter. The only good thing about leaving was I was ready for a big greasy hamburger and a beer.

Once the canoe was tied to the top of my truck I told her I was going to change clothes before I left. I always keep clean clothes in the truck for the trip home. She smiled at me and reached in to show me she did the same thing. We stood and talked about when we could get together as we stripped down and changed. "Are you trying to look at my ass again mister?"

"Not trying I am succeeding." I said with a laugh.

We decided that I would take her to lunch on Tuesday when I was at her office. She climbed in her truck and began to back out as I got into mine. I motioned for her to roll down her window and when she did I looked at her and said, "I will see you on Tuesday and by the way...I am 52."

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was a fine read indeed, went down like a smooth whiskey. Thanks for sharing...!

roveroneroveroneover 3 years ago

Mmm...very very nice.

Enjoyed the characters, dialogue...and especially his slow and easy way to bring her around to trying quite new things...

tho you could use an editor-the syntax was quite jumbled at times.

5 and fave, and was quite pleased to see there's a follow-up rated even higher, and a couple of Similar Stories whose titles look promising.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well written but with a caveat

I enjoyed this but I kept being knocked out of the narrative by the main character's attitude towards women. He explicitly keeps saying no strings attached but then is frustrated women in the past took him at his word. Then the woman has the same underlying attitude that the expectation for all male / female relationship is a quid pro quo. It's just a turn off. A little editing to let them just view each other as human would improve it immensely. I loved the description of the setting and I'd love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I will have to say,

very well written and a joy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice story

Well done!

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