All Comments on 'Intrigued Ch. 02'

your such a damn tease.. just enough to (incoming balloon comparison) "blow me up", but not enough to "pop" me... next chapter longer and more detailed plz...

if this were a joint it would be the finest one ever made...

You are a talented writer, and if you use editors... then hey... perfect. I really enjoyed reading your story, once I got to ch. 2, I began to get comfortable in believing the grammar would stay true allowing me to continue o. in the story and it did. I'm a teacher, so typos in published stories tick me off, my own included. LOL

Thank you for your gift.