All Comments on 'Irkutsk Ch. 11'

The story is wandering around now, so perhaps it needs some structure to the plot / story line. This story has the potential to very dynamic as the author has 44 female characters to choose from and develop.

The one character that has to be developed in a lot more depth is Michael, then The Goddness and finally the mansion doctor.

I would like to read a difficult situation between the residents of mansion. For example, one female trying to monopolise Michael or Michael being hurt during an overzealous female during BDSM session with Michael, or even Michael upsets the Goddness and she disciplines him in the dungeon and other 43 females vent their disapproval of her actions !