All Comments on 'Ishmael'

This is different but GOOD!

You have talent for more than one field, I guess you put it to good use, or you should!

Thanks,

John

from Budapest

An outstanding story. The redemption of someone who had fallen, the growth of love, and the element of danger from the villian. Please write more along these lines.

There isn't much I can say to this... it's beautiful. Thank you for the memories of the read. It touched me in personal ways you can only imagine. It would seem I am in your debt MB, you have found a reader in me. Thank You again, until then I remain...

-Just @ Fan

My heart is beating out of control. That ending was devastating!! A master tale from a master storyteller. Should be on everyones' "favorites" list!

Good story flow, good wording. Not much for the erotica, but I actually enjoyed reading the story....strong thumbs up!

I loved the story, very light on the the erotica, but I think that is what made it so enjoyable to read.