by ohnudeone
Group sex probed, prodded and throughly examined in this lusty tale of guys and girls getting together to do what else; get it on! The sexual activity scenes are very hot and well written. Enjoyable Read! Terrific Write!
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I do notice the occasional missing word. It's like somewhere in the transfer from author to site a word here and there is lost.
Or maybe we all just need to be a little more careful. Or maybe we writers are just getting a little too excited?
Anyway, interesting plot, good execution. Keep it up