All Comments on 'It All Started Innocently Enough Ch. 03'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hello to Group!

Group sex probed, prodded and throughly examined in this lusty tale of guys and girls getting together to do what else; get it on! The sexual activity scenes are very hot and well written. Enjoyable Read! Terrific Write!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fairy tale

Quite a fairy tale. Lots of side trails still to be explored.

Sensualist2Sensualist2over 15 years ago
Excellent story

I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I do notice the occasional missing word. It's like somewhere in the transfer from author to site a word here and there is lost.

Or maybe we all just need to be a little more careful. Or maybe we writers are just getting a little too excited?

Anyway, interesting plot, good execution. Keep it up

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