All Comments on 'It Was Fate Ch. 08'

Contiue plzzzzz anxd put more sex and fcus more on annabeth and collin or whatevr they werew GREAT STORY

Getting better every time, please continue this series I am hooked.

...continue

please, please, please write more!!!!! Alec is one sexy cookie.

I hope you continue this story as I would love to see how it ends.

Do write more, I really love this story and I would love to read an ending! So many good stories never get finished :(

I love this story keep up the good work

Good story please continue it!!!!!

So many writers never finish they just leave and don't come back.

Please finish?

I've been reading literotica for 2 years now and have never ever read a completed story.

Breathlessly awaiting how this story plays out.

I need to how this ends please

I just finished reading this story, for the second time, hoping to give you a little more incentive to at least submit another chapter. I really like the story. It would be nice to see how Eli and Alec handle their situations. Could be fun. Looking forward to the next installment, still.

Get an editor! Your spelling, use of past/present/future tense, plural/singular usage and word meanings are in dire need of the touch of an excellent editor. Your sentence structure also needs help because you have some parts of your story (sentences here and there) that make absolutely no sense! It's a really good story that's diminished dramatically by the aforementioned issues.

I read all these chapters and now nothing for years? Why? Please finish it!!