by Athena_e19
Really, really great story. In every way. Well written and well thought out. Wouldn't have minded more reluctance from Erin though. She's not driven by lust in the same way Lucas is after all. But maybe that's going to change when he fucks her in her human form? Because I asume that that is what he is going to do... ;-)
I'm looking forward to the fight with Damon as well. Lucas can hardly claim to be alpha untill he has destroyed the other alfa (and probably a whole bunch of lesser males standing in his way, or simply to really prove his dominance).
I hope you will continue in the style of the first parts were his lust made him act callous (or rather he didn't since he wasn't really in control, but it might seem like that was the case). And I hope he won't be a goodie-two-shoes hero when he finaly does conquer. I mean, we're talking primitive instincts here, right? Hoping for some rape/harsh fucking of the Damons present dames (does he have any alpha female?) and executions/crippling of some (or all?) of the males (how about castration? That should prove who's boss as well as scare any possible survivors... ;)).
But I digress. Whatever you turn out, I'm sure it's going to be super. Together with this story: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=94843 (the author could learn something from you about the pain that a huge cock fucking mercilessly can cause, though...), It's a Were World is my favourite series on Literotica at the moment (and has been for quite some while). :-)
This is great,finally a new chapter on this wonderful saga.
One of the most erotic story i read on LIT,please continue.And more Erin/Lucas in animal or human form.Just wow!
Thank you for this fine story.Strange settings and ideas,hope there will be more adventures for Lucas and his family on his way to leadership.Loved it
Title says it all, best werewolf story I've read yet, please update soon
I noticed that you seem to update this every six months or so, and it's been about that time, so I'm hopeing that a new part will be coming in the next couple of weeks.
"The thick rod unlocked some inner vault of desire, of happiness, and Erin recognized that Lucas was her alpha now. He would lead her, and he alone. As her body erupted into orgasmic relief, that thought was cemented firmly in her most base instincts. "
I really want to see this expanded on to see just how far it will go. Hope you update soon.
Been so long without an update of this I'm getting the shakes. Reread the chapters more times than I can count, but I really wish to see more.
This is a wonderful story. It is one of the best I read so far. The combined categroy makes it different and the pace is light and charming. The sex scenes are also different, hot and strangely sexy.
It would be great if you could update as it has the basis of a wonderful piece of work.
Great story, combining two very delicious taboos in a fantasy setting. I can not wait to read the next part to the story.
Brava!
I'm a decent fan of this series, but this chapter is pretty awesome all because of the torture of Athena and Karen. Love the ass play, bondage, helplessness and being forced to come, etc. Hope you haven't given up on this series or at least the next chapter!
I can't wait to read more. This was very taboo; bestiality and incest rolled into one chapter as well!
I hope to see an update soon because the story is interesting too. Not just the sex bits, but the excitement of Lucas overthrowing and becoming Pack Leader is awaited.
I've rated 5/5 since I can't give a 10 or 100 for the whole series.
Just discovered this series.... Its a true shame you disappeared as I would have loved to read more about this.
I wonder if your coming back, or if anyone can continue this?
I would like to know if anyone is or will be taking this story, thanks
Curse of the amateur authors, for whatever reason to many good stories go in finished. That’s why I myself have only 1 posted because it’s finished. As apposed to the 5 I’m stuck on lol. I’m just nice enough to not leave folks hanging.