All Comments on 'Jacqueline and Josh'

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ArieluArieluover 11 years ago
I'm looking forward to reading more

I'm hoping that you continue with this one

JezellenJezellenover 11 years ago
I'm hooked

I hope there is more to come. I really like how this is starting.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 11 years ago

Yes, please continue..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good start

Good start , not great but you have me hooked . Can't wait to read more.

honeybreehoneybreeover 11 years ago
5!

I can't wait to found out the "until what..." part...lol great start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good first effort

Promising.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good start

Many people are in similar situations. It is very difficult to make the first move for fear of losing friendship. This time of year there are often opportunities to move things ahead. It is better to take a risk than regret forever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great...

Loved the start of this story. Please update often. I cannot wait for more interaction between Jacqui and Josh.

london101london101over 11 years ago
please continue

Love it... Continue.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
I'm in love already

I hope there will a whole lot more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
so cute!!!

I wanna see where this relationship goes lol so please more!

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