All Comments on 'Jane's Play Thing'

Beautifully written and extremely explicit. Don't know why Jane changed her tactics, but I'm sure that "he" [whatever his name was] enjoyed the change.

Keep those stories cumming

I thought this was well done and would appreciate more of your writings. I must admit I did miss that his name never came up. The one thing that surprised me is that he didn't know enough to give her oral. It almost seems like he had never given oral but had certainly knew her scent. Jane needs to teach her play thing how to pleasure her orally and he will not be afraid of not being able to breath.

Noticing the new chapter just published here, I started re-reading the story from the start. Damn this is incredibly hot. So passionate! Your descriptions of the sex are so thorough and intense without being monotonous, a skill often lacking in the authors here.

I am looking forward to the following chapters.

Thank you for writing and posting here.