All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 02'

Really good story, got the mood just right.

Misspelled "clitoris."

So much more than I expected... Crisp writing, nice characterization and brilliant sex. I'll be reading this again soon.

Great, wonderful! But get an editor! :)

Somethings a spell checker just cannot pickup!

and mainly well-written, just spoiled by a few wee slips. But very erotic indeed.

This second part was all the more believable and ultimately explosive, due to the interaction of Jenny and Terry, before he left for work. Personally I don't see the need for an editor, just the continuation of a natural writing style.

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For Ch. 1, I gave you a 5.0 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

For Ch. 2, I gave you a 5- (☆☆☆☆☆-)!

For Ch. 3, I gave you a 5.0 (☆☆☆☆☆)!