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Click hereTo Be Continued
For Ch. 1, I gave you a 5.0 (☆☆☆☆☆)!
For Ch. 2, I gave you a 5- (☆☆☆☆☆-)!
For Ch. 3, I gave you a 5.0 (☆☆☆☆☆)!
This second part was all the more believable and ultimately explosive, due to the interaction of Jenny and Terry, before he left for work. Personally I don't see the need for an editor, just the continuation of a natural writing style.
and mainly well-written, just spoiled by a few wee slips. But very erotic indeed.
Great, wonderful! But get an editor! :)
Somethings a spell checker just cannot pickup!