All Comments on 'Jill Ch. 05'

That was your comment from the last chapter of this story. The situation has not improved Jill is a cheating slut for black cock and sadly always will be. It should be the end of her marriage but it sadly it wont be. I pity the cucked husband and the daughter.

Chapter 5 ruined the rest of the story. Suspension of disbelief disappeared. It makes me sad.

I completely agree that there are enough "wife gone black, and never going back" cuckold stories out there. This is just the first third of the whole story. Has Jill turned into a slut? Not yet, even after all that she thinks has happened.

Appreciate constructive criticism. Was it well-written? Spelling or grammatical errors? Did you visualize anything while reading the story? Were you intrigued by anything? Aroused by anything? What worked, and what could have been improved?

Saying I ruined it... that doesn't leave me much to work with.