All Comments on 'Joanie Takes Control Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good story

I like the way that you've brought out his innate submissiveness, and also the way that you've developed a loving D/s relationship between them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A good slave with Aids or worse

He must have had the IQ of a grape. Punch this cunt in the face and be done. This was just ridiculous, even for fiction.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Another great one!

Hope to see more! I'd love to hear of the other slaves punishment. And what a great reward for him. Well done. And congrats on your first troll comment from annon that's in denial with their dark kinks!! Please continue and thanks again for the great read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
AWWWWW!

I was really hoping he'd eat his anal load! Love the series, keep 'em coming!

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago

very nice ending, I wish you would get active again, and write more hot stories like this for all to read and enjoy.

Tinkertaylor99Tinkertaylor99over 1 year ago

mmmmm. loved the series

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