All Comments on 'John and Cindy'

by Harvey503

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sensuous Read!

I found this sexual foray between the main character and his best friend's wife really hot.The text in the story was very graphic, and detailed nicely. In spite of a few problems this story was exciting to read.

ohioohioover 17 years ago
good story

I look forward to more from you!

ohio

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
B'day?

I enjoyed the story but the word is bidet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hard to read

The grammar, capitalisation, and spelling were all quite bad. Either English is not your first language or you are just bad at it. Also the idea that out of nowhere she would let him wash her pussy and laughing over the affair rather than being suspicious was rather unbelievable. An editor would have helped this story a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bravo

I loved this story very much a turn on for me. I am in the same situation with the husbands best friend. It's always hot.

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