All Comments on 'John, Julie, Jenny and Me Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Why make him so WIMPY

Some of the erotic intrigue was believable but in a truly loving relationship "big" suprises like these are avoided and limits respected. I truly thought you would have made them MAN UP by now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Divorse

"Since you allowed three stangers to rape me without my consent and now I may be infected with STDs and/or HIV, gather your shit and get out before I do something you will surely regret. You will be served divorse papers on Tuesday Jenny! In the meantime I will be calling the police and reporting to them that I am the victim of three counts of sexual assault! No get the fuck out!

ChagrinedChagrinedalmost 14 years ago
JeffWroteThis?

Well, Jeff needs to have his fingers broken and his computer seized because this is crap! Nothing but sick sex here.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caalmost 14 years ago
Bullshit

Hey .... Some light bondage Ana some slap and tickle is all in good fun ... But forced and deceptive rag rape by the wifes hand ??? Where does this spring from or the whole bondage setup for that matter?? Wifey has been turned behind the scenes?? The hubby is straight thus far, he'd be really pissed at her deception! Even swinger sex has a code of conduct about it.

jbilovejbilovealmost 14 years ago
Great!!

The negative comments have me fuming. Of course, one guy couldn't even spell divorce. Those two who made negative comments were obviously entranced enough to read the whole thing.

Neither one of them is a real man. They feel threatened and take it out on others.

They need to get a life.

Thanks for the story and I hope you continue with the series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
One small step for man...

one large step on the "gay highway". not one to judge; but if she is trying to turn him into a queer, could she at least be up front with it?

Evie_MarieEvie_Mariealmost 13 years ago
Geesh guys this is just fantasy!

Female here- yes, I enjoy a wildly exotic monogamist relationship. We both enjoy talking/playing roles and just pretending. My BF is my sex toy and also my love. And I enjoy taking him to new limits while I tease and talk to him. This was a fun story, fiction not fact. Read, enjoy, use your imagination and share what you like with your partner. That's what I think this site is about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fucking seven people shot at John and julie's House of which two were john and julie

Seven people were found shot to death this morning. Two of them were the home owners, John and Julie and a third woman named Jenny had thier pussies, breast, and anal areas mutilated. The other two couples as of this time have not been identified. The husband of Jenny was found at home a sleep and when questioned was in a state of shock and could not believe his wife had been a part of this perverted sex orgy that had transpired between his wife, Julie and John and the other two couples. After extensive questioning he was released as there was no evidence that he had any knowledge of what had happen and a video was found showing all of the other perticipants, but we have not yet identified who was operating the camera and all evidence points to him as being a sadistic mad man who shot the footage had killed all the other people. It seems that Julie and Jenny had master mined this whole thing. They had special torture rings and binders built into thier home and had made men suck other men and after being fucked by other men had made Julie;s spouse suck thier pussies of the other men's cum and while these men were chained had other men to stick thier dicks into thier mouths and cum. Truely they got thier just rewards

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Lucy

Lucy you've got some splaining to do. If not your getting kicked to the curb.

FseriesFseriesover 7 years ago
Wrong

It's one thing to go together into something, but she has gone behind his back and has at least explored the concept further if not have already done extra marital events without his knowledge or permission. How would she react if he did similar? Nope. Lay down the law or drop her.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
No

If Jeff wrote this cucky mess, he Jeff should be really ashamed of himself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Playing can be fun but this was at best humiliation and at worst almost rape. What happens between consenting adults is fair game but this was not consensual. If it had of been me in that situation I would not have been tied up and even if I was stupid enough to be tied up after my beating and being released several people would have been laying on the floor bleeding from my wrath.

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