All Comments on 'Jordan's Journey'

If you wrote this and your a white guy you are seriously fucked up.

didn't take time to finish it too long should warn reader that it is a long story

i have not beenso turned on in long time wonderful story, i would love to be jordoan for a week , wild and wonderful black cock such a turn on well done

Really hope there will be a sequel to this. One of the best I've read recently and totaly worth the length. Great story, very hot!!

what a road trip for jordan , just think about all the black cock anytime u wanted to suck it or fuck it , wwhat a dream , great story

loved it all esp the hot realtor

i loved it , a real turn for sure , sometimes i get where i want to act like that for sure, the the sales agent lol i loved, i want to know about the trip to chicago has to be wet and wild , be great to do that before you die for sure

Loved the story as it flowed and great lines, too...Now we need a couple of following up parts - the trip in the van to Chicago and at least one more when the movers return back home and contact the hot realtor...can't wait for the next parts....

Just located your story and a great one, indeed. Keep going on the next chapters, the road and the move to the new place as surely a few new chapters must be produced...Keep up the pen and the writing and I will be looking out for them, too.

Wife to husband - "Honey I'm a slut". Husband to wife - "Pack your stuff and send me your new address to send the divorce papers to". That's all there is folks! Oh and you might try getting an original idea and writing about it in a more imaginative way.