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by dootsie

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keikei2keikei2almost 15 years ago
Looking good

I like your story. I would love to read more about joce and lessa. I only found 1 error in the story but other than that i liked it. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good job!!!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonalmost 15 years ago
Intrigued

Loved the premise and your characters. Looking forward to the next part soon hopefully!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOLDING THE BABY

GOOD START TO THIS SOME WHAT SEXY STORY. NOW FOR TE NEXT PART

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Promising start

Await chapter two.

SambranoSambranoalmost 15 years ago
Very refreshing writing style

Nice little vignette, with a saucy lead character. In your next story, try to use a little less italics, although I admit they helped convey the mood in places. It was a fun read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Is this some kind of weird joke???

No beginning and no end and the most important thing - NO SEX!!! I don't think Erotica is your genre.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Short, but good

Where's chapter two?

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