by Bazzza
your characters acts like a couple in love and acts like one. there teasing is erotic. Hot read. thanks.
Really great to see a wife and husband loving and enjoying their marriage. Not some damned "loving wife" that's a fucking old whore and a husband that jacks off while she fucks 50 men.
He is so far removed from true reality that he doesn't recognize it when it appears in front of his eyes. It is pitiful to live life as if there were no real or true committments.
Such touch Author - you create the wave in them and we ride it. Great stuff !<P>
Was that proactive or not.<P>
With Very High Regard
Your short tale shows that a truly erotic yet loving story does not need a man hung like a horse able to "cum" 10 times in an hour. Moreover, guess what? The woman doesn't like the taste! One of the best stories I've read here in a while! Thanks!
Characters showed just enough edge to make them seem like 'real' people; the wifes budding angst as the event draws near, the husbands dead serious line, "Not near as much as I love you", the escalating teasing back and forth. Just very well done. Please Sir, may we have another?
A loving wife, IN A LOVING WIFE STORY???? IMPOSIBLE!!!!!!!
You seem to manage to get to the "heart" of things very quickly. I really liked this one.
I have enjoyed reading many of your stories. In at least two of them you have a line that goes something like, “...underside of the glands...”. You are talking here about the glans, which is part of the penis.
Elements of real life in many of these. Jealous wife needlessly tests husband, etc.
That was a real loving wife story. Actually, it was a real good loving wife story.
A fictional couple who are actually madly in love and devoted to one another. Lovely.