All Comments on 'Kilajar, Slave of Master Azhuram'

This was a wonderful story. It always pleases me to see bits of Majick in the stories around here.

I ahve enjoyed your other stories as well, but this is my fave.

Emerald

AWESOME!!!

The plot is nice. My dear, you need to get someone to edit and proof read. The misspellings and grammar errors detract from a very nice story.