by tenedave
Realy liked it, however i belive the perspective must be more statonarry, i think it jumps from male to female.
Keep up the good work
Very hot. Though I agree with other comment...perspective needs to be more defined. There is no clear transition from one to the other and makes the reader pause for a moment.
Wonderful story. Well written and spellbinding. You and Kitty Kat seem like a great team, more to cum I hope?
It's good but I don't care for the point of view if your master don't ponder what she thinks doesn't matter. Or if your slave just use that.