by tenedave
It's good but I don't care for the point of view if your master don't ponder what she thinks doesn't matter. Or if your slave just use that.
Wonderful story. Well written and spellbinding. You and Kitty Kat seem like a great team, more to cum I hope?
Very hot. Though I agree with other comment...perspective needs to be more defined. There is no clear transition from one to the other and makes the reader pause for a moment.
Realy liked it, however i belive the perspective must be more statonarry, i think it jumps from male to female.
Keep up the good work