All Comments on 'Kitty Kats Training Ch. 02'

by tenedave

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LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
good

It's good but I don't care for the point of view if your master don't ponder what she thinks doesn't matter. Or if your slave just use that.

AmoraAmoraabout 17 years ago
Very Hot

Wonderful story. Well written and spellbinding. You and Kitty Kat seem like a great team, more to cum I hope?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot

Very hot. Though I agree with other comment...perspective needs to be more defined. There is no clear transition from one to the other and makes the reader pause for a moment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good but...

Realy liked it, however i belive the perspective must be more statonarry, i think it jumps from male to female.

Keep up the good work

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