by BothWorld
I liked it! Nice and fun and not mean spirited. Of course there is the going behind the hubby's back and medicating him thing, but, all in all the wife seemed pretty good natured, with an agenda. Would be fun to read more of this story!
I would expect Simon to dump Gina eventually, for one of
the other "Transformed" men. It sounds like Simon would eventually desire another man's cum, and that Gina would not be able to supply that for him. If I was Simon, I
would have figured out that Gina and the Doctor had
somehow done this to him, would be insenced that it was done without his consent. I would not be able to trust Gina, even if I had a desire to become a transvestite. I wonder if there is going to be a sequel to this story were Simon gets to manipulate Gina's body.
wow I think this was one really hot story and would love to see it go on and on
that was amazing, wildest story i've read in a long time can relate to that feeling too
I loved your story! It fun and enjoyable without any of the abuse that you frequently find in tales of this type. I could agree with some of the commentators that Simon should have figured out who and what was responsible for his changes. However; I did like your approach about Simon not knowing the source of his changes which provided additional intrigue to the situation. Also I like the fact that you did not reveal what the real side effects of the serum on Simon's upper body until towards the end of your story. You must do a follow up chapter on this story. I can think of several directions that you could take it, but that is your decision.
I really injoyed this story so much it made me wish i was that man in the story to have a big beautiful cock oh pinis and big tits would be a dream come true.
How about a follow up to this? Fact that wife likes husband to have breasts and dress in womens clothes has got to mean more fun
Wish this had been me. I'm already a cocksucking crossdresser that gives my mouth and ass to anyone. To actually have the tits of a woman and a large cock at the same time plus my love of eating cum would be heaven. Last night I sucked and fucked an 11 inch cock and I've never had one that felt so satisfying. He drove it all the way to the balls and I wanted more.
talk about a turn on! I got hard and had to jack it off as I read this story. i'm a crossdresser so all of this appealed to me. I often think about how great it would be to have a pussy instead of my cock but if i could have the things in the story that would solve my frustrations. At present, taking a 10 inch cock in my cunt is the greatest thrill possible. to feel it filling my hole and begging for more, wanting it deeper and harder. I have a 15" x 7.6" inch dildo that I use to fuck my ass pussy every day and can get about ten inches of it into my "slut whore cunt". I get fisted by a woman every now and then and that is a different feeling. she can get her fist and arm almost to her elbow. I generally look for black men because what they say about black cocks being larger is true plus they enjoy fucking the "honky white bitches" like me. I'm a cum slut that will give my ass to any cock available.
the perfect attributes for a new gurl! Loved it and want some of it.
I enjoyed reading the story a lot and found it enjoyable and very sexy. I particularly liked that the transformation was a positive thing all around and that Gina and Simon stayed together at the end. I'll also say that there's possibilities for more stories given the setup of the clinic that you have here.
Seriously... do you get evil laughs when writing this and increased heart beats? That's because its the work of an evil genius!
Oh I so want to be Simone right now.This story set my pulse to racing and the blood rushing from my head to , well you know where the blood rushed to. My panties are so tight right now. Guess it is time for the butt plug.
Thanks for this first installment. Your writing is extremely smooth and your story very erotic.
I did not like to look at nude men or their equipment. I am not so sure now, but I would be willing to learn how to please their endowments....I don't need or necessarily want my cock to be larger. I just would like some large dick male or she male to find me desirable enough to teach me how to be a great bottom cock sucking boy pussy for them in exchange for adoration, tenderness, loving attention and discretion. Maybe they would buy me panties, baby doll pj's and other lingerie once I became practice at pleasing them??
Are you as talented in the love dept. as you are a writer of same?
It looks like the Doc has tried the cock enlargement drug herself or is it himself. It seems that the Doc did not tell Simon about his wife getting the drug from her and the side effects that it caused. I find it disgusting that a wife who is supposed to love her husband would drug him and cause these side effects that she knew about to only increase her own sexual pleasure. Now the Doc wants his wife to use a strap-on to fuck Simon. That seems to go against the original idea of the story of Simon to fuck his wife with a large cock. Will she still get him to fuck her? Simon should see that the Doc and his wife might be up to something together. He should get a second opinion from another Doc without his wife knowing the Doc or the appointment. The breasts could be removed with surgery and other things could be done as well. He needs to start looking into what may caused him to change and snoop to see if he can find the drug that was used on him. He can not go to work looking like a woman. Maybe he can bind and cover his breasts to look like the man he is so that he can go to work.
Does Gina take her former husband out to bars to find stud's they can suck and fuck
The wife dies a quick, but truly terrifying, death from stangulation after he shoves that strap on down her throat the minute they get home.
Once dressed and make up and hair done it is off to find big cocks .I have a thing for big monster cocks.A big cock is not easy to find as you my think.I have found six to eight inch but none bigger.So i found on line a mistress who will use only eight to fourteen inches both in my ass and down my throat.I have now taken fourteen inches deep in my ass.She fucked my so long and hard i could not walk.Now tied to a table she is forceing fourteen well lubed didlo down mu throat and fucking my mouth hard.
Big fun.
It easy enough to nik-pic about each and every single detail when it comes to great fiction, although much of the previous commentary about your brilliant little story seems to want to indicate exactly that kind of Minutia BW.
Truth be told; if Gina and the Doctor had not agreed to proceed with Simon’s penis enlargement treatments - despite the side effects that you very cleverly neglect to reveal to your readers at that point - how could you have made ‘Land of Huge Cocks’ the imaginative hot, steamy and humorous story that is I just now, thoroughly enjoyed reading?
I did not notice a need for any editing either BW. Good writing!