All Comments on 'Lara'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Your debut

A great debut story, Pearl. That female step mother just sounds gorgeous. More, please.

belvoriangarathbelvoriangarathover 14 years ago
Loved it.

Great story, absolutely loved it. Nice pace, and an easy read.

wdelanderwdelanderover 14 years ago
Great story

That was so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Snorting Capitalist???

Are you kidding me??? If he were a communist he would be a better man? British socialist propaganda should be left on blogs…..

MartinC1969MartinC1969over 14 years ago
Great Story

Couldnt fault it at all, I cant wait to read more :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very nice!

Great first story! The ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise I loved it. Is there more to follow?

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