All Comments on 'Legend Of Mystic Forest Ch. 01'

by chezcubby1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
learn the language

You must get your time line streight. Is it now or 5 years ago, is it day or night. You sleep all night to get up and shoot infrared film during day or night.

Do not forget the old adage "got" is a weed in the garder of grammer

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Truely beautiful

Your tale is warm and heart felt, in fact, sorry to say, it's just to "good" to be in Literotica.

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Almost dreamlike...

Your words spin a soft, lovely tale. I live in a forest setting and I felt, saw, and heard each sentence. Very pretty and so romantic!

GoddessOfSoulsGoddessOfSoulsover 19 years ago
Mmmmmmm Lovely

The ability to show others the beauty you see in your woodland paradise, untouched by human changes, reading your words makes me long for a touch of Magic in the world around us again. Very Well Done, I enjoyed it

Welcome Chubby I look forward to more of your stories

staggerleestaggerleeover 19 years ago
Mystical

Wonderful, mystical story. You put me in the forrest in a dreamlike state.

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