All Comments on 'Leo's Device'

Nice story. Described and made Emily a person before the transition. As for the incest, no problems there. The forbidden fruit aspect of it done so wantonly shows the level of control. It was hot. This is after all a erotic mind control story!

Good job and very good fast hitting story.

this category frequently shows family love but the guy/guy stuff was unexpected, unlisted, and unwelcome. the teacher could easily have been female, solved this problem.

If u want to put male to male in not gay-cat, u should warn us first it is kinda turn off

I quite enjoyed this story the incest and male on male was un expected but not bad. Part 2 please

You're attempting to please to many genre in far to short of a story.