All Comments on 'Lesser Gods Ch. 10-13'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
cool

Nicely written can't wait to see what is going to happen next

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Great

Now we are really getting to it!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
One More

and I'll be all caught up, what then?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Illogical

I understand how Grey is supposed to have an effect on women but Zoe's actions just seem totally irrational. Instead of getting pissed at Grey for keeping all these secrets and "setting her up to fail" she just demands to leave. She complains that Grey and Enrique are broken records about how she is in danger, yet not once does she ask what the danger is. She is clearly scared of what is haunting her in the nightmares but she doesn't ask Grey. Instead of just demanding Grey explain things to her and threaten to leave, she just leaves.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good story. Raises interesting issues. Appealing characters

LangeannLangeann10 months ago

I don’t want this story to end.

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