by HexGlow
I agree to good to be this short ... please make them longer... need more...
from my very first submission people have been telling me to write longer chapters.
there is some thing seriously evil going on here. this chapter was 9 pages on Microsoft word and here its just 1 page!!
This is a great story and it deserves 5 stars but I only gave it a 4 because Your chapters are Annoyingly Too Short!!! Please write longer chapters.
15 pages will get you 2 pages, 21 or so get you 3 pages and better
Votes and comments. We are just greedy for more. It is a compliment
even with the few typos.
But the consensus seems to be LONGER chapters,,not just a short quick page,,or will just have to wait until you post 3 or so,then read them,,so i can enjoy it longer than a minute or 2..
This is absolutely brilliant some of the best writing i've seen on here. I agree that the chapters could be longer but that's ok as the quality of the work speaks for it self. You keep writing i'll keep reading and voting.
Its great love it! your fans including me are being greedy ;)
we want more and make it longer please
love your work!
The chapters are too short to really bite into, and a mere taste just isn't satisfying. Even after 5 chapters, you have barely given us glimpse into the characters' history and no real understanding on what's going on besides the sex.
I love this story! i just wish that the chapters were a little longer. You are a great writer and i do so hope that you will have lots more to write! i know you can do it and it will be great you have great characters and so much to go on too! PLEASE post soon! i am dying to see what is next! :)