All Comments on 'Life as a Rogue Ch. 05'

by HexGlow

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is too good to be so short please longer chapters.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOover 10 years ago
*****

I agree to good to be this short ... please make them longer... need more...

HexGlowHexGlowover 10 years agoAuthor
aaahhhhh!!

from my very first submission people have been telling me to write longer chapters.

there is some thing seriously evil going on here. this chapter was 9 pages on Microsoft word and here its just 1 page!!

Squirt65Squirt65over 10 years ago
Too Short!!!!

This is a great story and it deserves 5 stars but I only gave it a 4 because Your chapters are Annoyingly Too Short!!! Please write longer chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Pages

15 pages will get you 2 pages, 21 or so get you 3 pages and better

Votes and comments. We are just greedy for more. It is a compliment

even with the few typos.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaover 10 years ago
Good,

But the consensus seems to be LONGER chapters,,not just a short quick page,,or will just have to wait until you post 3 or so,then read them,,so i can enjoy it longer than a minute or 2..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is absolutely brilliant some of the best writing i've seen on here. I agree that the chapters could be longer but that's ok as the quality of the work speaks for it self. You keep writing i'll keep reading and voting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing! More

Its great love it! your fans including me are being greedy ;)

we want more and make it longer please

love your work!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago

The chapters are too short to really bite into, and a mere taste just isn't satisfying. Even after 5 chapters, you have barely given us glimpse into the characters' history and no real understanding on what's going on besides the sex.

BadCittyLadyBadCittyLadyover 10 years ago
Love it!!! More PLEASE! update soon

I love this story! i just wish that the chapters were a little longer. You are a great writer and i do so hope that you will have lots more to write! i know you can do it and it will be great you have great characters and so much to go on too! PLEASE post soon! i am dying to see what is next! :)

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