All Comments on 'Little Bear Ch. 02'

Much better than part 1 . Very different and very good . Where do you go from here ?

I absolutely love this story. Your writing is beautiful and your sexual narrations, exquisite. Likewise they are generally believable, not stretching credulity. I would even add that they are romantic as evidenced by the candles and soft jazz music. This is a tale that could easily be just another example of one-handed reading but, for the reasons cited above, it rises above that.