All Comments on 'Loaner Ch. 2'

Couldn’t even read this all the way through.

TAGS - once again you missed off important tags like Pet Play and Toilet Outdoors (or similar?)

I felt sorry for the poor woman because the cretin is obviously clueless as a Dom, possibly clueless as a human being as well. He’s taking stupid dangerous risks with her safety and welfare and that’s aside from the fact that this kind of scenario is likely to be some kind of test from his boss.

NIPPLE CLAMPS - leave them on for longer than 20-30 mins (less time for some) and there’s a risk of permanent nerve damage. If you’re going to write about kink then do some research first. On a similar vein just because her husband described her as a “slut slave” that doesn’t mean that she doesn’t have any hard limits or a safe word.

On the upside at least I I got a chuckle out of this chapter via an unfortunate typo, unless she’s some kind of minister she’s more likely to be performing ablutions in the bathroom.

Tess (UK)