All Comments on 'Lola Wants'

I like the setup of this story already. More please!

I like it when you get a feel for the characters in each story. Sex or not this seems like it's going to be a really good series.

Promising.

Five.

It's coming along quite well. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Unfortunately I couldn't see the path of the story. From the way the description was going I had a feeling that Adrian and Lola had something going on...and I know that's not right. Also there's too much interchanging between the name Fallon and Lola - it's a bit distracting.

Really good start. It seems that Lola like standing out and being diffrent from the rest of the crowd. Can't wait to read Ch.2

Hope you're not some of the other authors on this site. Start a story get people into it and then just stop.

I don't believe there is any real need for the confusion about the names. Pick one and stick with it.

good start

Good background chapter, stage is set on with the...seduction? A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.