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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Don't leave us hanging

You've taken your time to build the scene and to develop the characters. You've done it right. For God's sake don't leave us hanging. You've got a great story that needs to be fully told. Ronnie W.

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I love to read and write. I am currently working on a series of erotic short stories.

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