All Comments on 'Looking Into His Eyes'

I would much appreciate any feedback, thank you <3

I thought this story was interesting.

I really like this one as well. I would like to see what happens. You seem to understand BDSM very well. I wish you would expand a little more. I realized we don't even know what the female looks like. Is she short or tall fat or skinny? Personally I say a tiny blonde with an hour glass figure that was realistic. You might have seen an overweight woman with green eyes and black hair. We know she is somewhere between 24 and 18 which you did a nice job of telling us but that is about it.

Wonderful, please continue.