All Comments on 'Love and Nothing Less Ch. 01'

Good start I would really like to read more of this story and

I'm glad I came across it. One thing is bugging me though, will Kaelyn have already had sex with Jacob? Cause that's going be weird when her and celebs relationship progress.

loved it!!!waiting on pins and needles for the rest!!!!!!!!

The story is starting off nicely. Not to fast so that you don't get to know the characters. Interested in seeing how you move forward with the story. JV

Definitely off to a great start! Keep it up! I have a feeling even though Jacob has his girl...he's not going to let it go so easily when his brother comes sniffing around...;-) Great set up.

Please keep going with this story. I really I am enjoying it. I keep coming back to your page to check and see if you post another part to this story. I really hope you finish this story. You are a wonderful writer too.

I hope you update this story because you could take this story so many directions with Kaelyn & Caleb's potential relationship. Great start.

-FEJ

I'm looking forward to see what comes next.Also, if you could find an editor or someone to proofread that would help-contat me even, and I'll do it ! But the story in itself is already showing great promises, so please continue

This is the start of a great story. I'm sorry you've decided not to finish it or to write anymore. What a loss.

Some people can be mean about other people work because the cannot write themselves.

Please continue your story, it was one of the most beginning story I have read on this site. Remember, people are hateful when you a better than them.

Again, I and others enjoyed the beginning of this story.

You're not finishing the story!?! You can't just leave us hanging! Please Finish, I wanna know what happens!

Good luck on your pursuit of veterinary medicine! If you decide to continue writing I would suggest (like many others) that you seek out an editor. The beginning of this story is really interesting but it's clear you struggled with using the proper tense and with grammar (not like I can dish out too much criticism I'm horrible with grammar) but I really wanted to like this story but the mistakes detracted from it. So with that said, I'd enjoy finding out what happens between Kaelyn, Caleb and Jacob, it's a promising story.

before I take leave here, just remember that in life you're always going to face some critics, it's how you handle it that makes the difference, make no mistake becoming a vet is going to be just as difficult. Don't let others stop you from pursuing your goals.. Ever!

again Good Luck Hun!

When you have time please update, I keep coming back to this story.

you will continue with this lovely tale.

Finish, this story is captivating.

when will you finish it?

I hope that you are going to finish this story and not just leave it/us/me hanging waiting forever!?!?! Please and thank you are always implied ☺