by jamie
Jamie has become my absolute favorite author. I anxiously await her next chapter of galactic travels.
I can't wait for the next chapter. The first two chapters were amazing.
Though I doubt there will be a sequel after so long a time, I would have loved to have seen the end of the story, with Will having sex with Penny, Judy and Fleeline.
YOUR DESCRIPTION OF BREASTS, AUREOLE, NIPPLES , CUNT, CUNT HAIR, CUNT LIPS AND ANALINGUS IS UTTERLY UNQUE, EROTIC AND POWERFUL - VERY , VERY BEAUTIFUL - BEAUTIFUL EROS.
SUPERB - I CAN MAKE LOVE TO YOU ALL DAY AND ALL NIGHT - YOU ARE THE BEST AND I HAVE READ HUNDREDS & HUNDREDS - I LOVE YOU..
Great story waiting for more but not nearly as great as your picture.you are beautiful.you could be a model anywhere and in any type of publication.again very good story well writen and very beautiful writer
Its ok. It could be so much better. In both chapters the relationships go nowhere beyond initial fleeting contact. Don is barely mentioned, John is barely mentioned, Will is basically a teenaged boy who has only had sex once, anally. Judy's few sexual encounters you describe as 'dull', but she is 48yrs old and been in space since she was 17. Seems to me like ANY sexual encounter would be pretty damn exciting. The 'Aphrodisiac' doesn't seem to have affected Don, Will, or John, and only succeeded in getting the devious Dr. Smith bound and gagged. You are more descriptive of Maureen's episodes with Dr.Nora before launch than the sex lives of the family members in the ensueing 30yrs.
My God, Jamie! - you must do the Chapter 3 - I can't believe your erotic breast description - I love breasts n I've been looking for a good description on this website for more than 10 years - I finally found it here - love you - may I worship n suck you n your breasts one day - Chris/Yukimi