All Comments on 'Lustful Leeves Ch. 01'

by angelicminx

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ImagetakerImagetakerabout 19 years ago
Intersting mix!

Certainly different from the typical wham bam thank you ma'am stories on here. Fun story. How did you avoid the puns on "nuts"?

neonlyteneonlyteabout 19 years ago
Original

Full marks for originality. Great fun, well done - I'll read the rest to see if they kept pace with your opener.

SweetVASweetVAabout 19 years ago
Great fun!

I'll never be able to climb a tree again without thinking of this story. :p VA

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueabout 19 years ago
Phew!

Saw the crazy build-up to this and I never thought you guys could pull this off.

It is really great and deserves to win something for someone. Settle for the 5-bomb!

OhMissScarlettOhMissScarlettabout 19 years ago
a tree-humping good time

Very interesting and well-written little tale of lust and tree bark. Good luck in the contest! -Scarlett

cookiejarcookiejarabout 19 years ago
:)

What a wonderful little story. I'm very impressed with your work. Good luck!

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoabout 19 years ago
Absolutely charming.

Kind of an erotic Mark Twain with your use of dialect. Highly original. Filled with humor and pathos. Kudos, minx.

eric

Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
Now that's what I call

getting a woody!

Great imagination here! Good story, Minx...

~Honey

dreampilot79dreampilot79about 19 years ago
But then I knew it would be

Excellent story ... but then.. ummm I knew it would be!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
wow

what a story, wild and imaginative <grin> excellent and good luck (~_*)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fascinating

Veeeery different but very well done.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 19 years ago
Fun story - WOOD I lie?

Good read, Minx. A funny, and VERY original, story with a poignant little twist at the end. Good use of dialect in the dialogue. Good luck.

Rumple

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Very Different

Good story, from a totally different point of view. Classy writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Funny and Sad

I love the Funny side of this story, and a love the twist of him really being I Love with the trees.. made it sad and loney. But I think it was great and I want more please

Anonymous
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