by mjm202036
So far this is pretty good but could use more well defined characters.
i like how julie is turning into a spawn/succubus thingy and i liked how you implied that with her eyes. And wow that was fast for the pimp to find them :o
Like I said above, I don't wanna beg but you fucking have to keep writing. Continue the fucking story I wanna see the succubus suck the pimps soul out or something, like rip his god damn head off, sorry for my language but I'm just passionate about reading the next story ASAP! Hurry up and keep up the good work!!!
Can't wait for the next action! Will the pimp succumb to pleasure or pain?