by kermit9
You aren't going to stop are you. Trust me there is a definite interest
Very very well written and erotic. I will need to go finish myself off with toy.
Whew...thank you kermit....
I felt very much a part of it -- would love to read the rest!
I enjoy window sex! That was sooo hot, had to masturbate. Keep those stories cumming!
That was fantastic. Really got my juices flowing, now have to do something about that. Please keep going, there is interest.
If there were any real money or desirable fame to be had from writing superb erotica, you'd be up there with Stephen King. You're one awesomely talented writer (and someone who'd be fun to roll around with!)
I loved it, any women out there interested in acting it out with me? Now don't leave us hanging and send us part 2 of the story? Not nice ;-)
kermit9,
that was H-O-T! great story. very well written. made me wet to read it.
AngelinNC
Please continue...and tell me where to find your next hotel...
What a fun story...! I like Lynn-lucky Dave-wife with way ramped up libido, both an exhitionist and voyeur...actually urging woman at the next table over to go for it
and actually raises some questions...just how big was the stripper at Lynn's bachelorette party? does the red (and I do like sm breasts...and LOVE reds) get pissed at the blonde leaving her high and dry and dump him...?
given dates pity you didn't decide to continue...5 and fave