All Comments on 'Make a Wish Ch. 02'

I would love to see more of jeannie! can you write more Jeannie chapters?

Very good set of stories please make another maybe with his friend and the cat wife

I, as the author of this, am reposting some older stories from another forum so they can reach a larger audience. I have so much garbage in my slush pile it is unlikely I will add anything else to this, but I REALLY appreciate the enthusiasm!

I'm afraid I'm a little demented. My ex-wife is a control freak. Ruined our marriage, and to this day, I don't think she see's it. Her mother and grandmother were controllers too, so she comes by it honestly. I would have really enjoyed 'kitty' once in a while. I still love her as she is, but still, a little feline playmate would be fun. She isn't very adventurous. But, if she had furr and markings like a tiger with the figure of Raquel Welch-wow. A long tail and six inch tongue with kitty ears and retractable claws, with a pussy having long labia that she could consciously operate combined with a voracious sex drive would be so cool. If I had a few wishes I'd like to have her back with a few 'modifications', while still being herself - just a little less pushy. This is a great story as it feeds my imagination so well. A modification or two to myself would be cool too, and, no - not size. Though that would not be unwelcome too.

I enjoy helpful feedback from my readers! I am sorry you were less than fully satisfied by the story. I will make sure you get a full refund.

I absolutely loved both chapters, thank you for writing and also for follow up comments, it helps. As much as I love magic etc the powers they had seemed too dangerous too me, accidentally changing personalities? scary lol.

I wish I was a capable writer as the mind control section has huge promise but only a few authors pull off wonderful stories like yours.

Thank you and Ps. good hypnotist stories or or stories of a new drug on the market that only makes the effected person crazily, insatiably horny would be fun without the unconscious non consent crap.

Hey Paladinblack, as a highly respected author, can you please tell me why females heights are so unrealistic . The average height of a women in the USA, as of 31st March 2018 is 5'3.7" (6 3.7 inch to avoid any confusion) and 5'5" average for white women. A 5'8" female would be on the 95th percentile, so it's unrealistic to have so many women . Is there some golden rule that women below a certain height don't do anything for the average reader, if so there's a hell of a lot of unhappy women in the states

Loved the story, however I wouldn't have been depressed at the reaction of his so called best friend, I'd have been fuming at his hiding behind his wife excuse and changed him to a eunoch, seeing as he hadn't got the balls to be honest with his friends.

Most likely it is just because many of us suck at guessing heights and other measurements. I've looked up things like that for some stories when it actually matters to the plot, but usually I'm just guessing my ass off.

Thank you, I didn't think you'd answer as I'm an anon. Love your stories, even with Amazonian size women, keep up the good work, happy New year from the UK

Great story, though I was surprised that he didn’t make any of his women pregnant, especially given that Jeannie gave him the ability to make anyone pregnant at will..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I think i was more focused on the harem fantasy part at that time. Is I wrote or updated it today, I would probably change several bits.

Great story. I'll agree that the "fertilize at will" ability could have been used at some point after being introduced, but whatever. I think the only downside is the loss of Tammy and Betty's previous identities. If they were such good friends of MC and Susan, respectively, didn't he just delete all of their memories of what seems like years of friendship?